All's Fair In Love & War(sequel To The Unexpected), Chapter 8 Finally Posted 8/11/09
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All's Fair In Love & War(sequel To The Unexpected), Chapter 8 Finally Posted 8/11/09
| Sarah1073 |
Jul 30 2008, 01:54 PM
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Whoa, Tink!! This chapter is very interesting!! How exactly did Sonny die and is it connected to Lorenzo?? Great job!! Continue!!
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| knhgrl1 |
Jul 30 2008, 05:17 PM
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Wow. Loved all the clues you dropped about Reese's and Carly's past and can't wait to find out what happened to Sonny and how does it involve Alcazar, and is there a triangle beginning to brew between Reese/Jason/Alcazar.
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R.I.P Reese Marshall...the ultimate ride or die chick.....Nov 14....You are missed If I had no more time...No more time left to be here...Would you cherish what we had?...Was it everything that you were looking for?...If I couldn’t feel your touch...And no longer were you with me...I’d be wishing you were here...To be everything that I’d be looking for....I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me...‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed...So every time you hold me...Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....Every time you touch me...Touch me like this is the last time....Promise that you’ll love me.....Love me like you’ll never see me again...How many really know what love is?....Millions never will...Do you know until you lose it....That it’s everything that we are looking for....When I wake up in the morning....You’re beside me....I’m so thankful that I found....Everything that I been looking for...I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me....‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed....So everytime you hold me.....Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....(can you do that for me baby)....Every time you touch me....(see we don’t really know)...Touch me like this is the last time....(see everyday we never know)...Promise that you’ll love me....(I want you to promise me).....Love me like you’ll never see me again.....(like you’ll never see me again)...Like You'll Never See Me Again/Alicia Keys...ReeSon Fan 4ever Check out my fanfics Fresh Starts/Crossroads/Into the Shadows/ Bullets and Diapers/When All Else Fails/The Machiavellian Twist/Mindgames/Webs of Deception/Lost Memories/Lethal Passions/Renee's Comeback/After All The Dust Settles/Love is Eternal/Destiny and Fate/Soul Twins/Vengeance and Passion/Endgame/Love and Pain/The Chronicles of Reese and Sonny Reese and ReeSon lives on in these stories...It's funny people say that ReeSon was a bomb...a failure...if that was really the case then why did ReeSon stay in the top of the polls and Kari stayed in the polls if ReeSon was a failure...what ended ReeSon was TPTB decision to sabotage the story by trying to destroy Reese's character and deciding to let Kari go....ReeSon was popular and a hit and one of the best Sonny pairings since S&B....if ReeSon was such a failure as the haters would like to believe then why are they still talking about them ~Kathryn H/knhgrl1~ Darkside#22 Reese's Piece#15 True love has no boundaries My YouTube Page My Twitter Page My Daily Motion Page MySpace Page Facebook Page Really liking this song KWO Rocks Kari Fan Always!!!!!! When you're having a bad day check this video out Manager meltdown on YouTube "It's all for love..,L.O.V.E" "I really feel that nature is trying so hard to compensate for man's mismanagement at the planet. Cause the planet is sick. like a fever, if we don't fix it now it's at the point of no return. This is our last chance to fix this problem that we have or it's like a runaway train and the time has come. This Is It. People are always saying, 'Oh they'll take care of it. The government, they'll' 'They'll?' 'They'll Who?' It starts with us, it's us, or else it'll never be done." Michael Jackson This Is It ![]() RIP Michael 08/29/58- 06/25/09 No more lying friends...Wanting tragic ends...Though they do pretend...They won't go when I go...All those bleeding hearts...With sorrows to impart...Were right here from the start...And they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,...To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Gone from painful cries...Away from saddened eyes...Along with him I'll bide....And they won't go when I go...Big men feeling small...Weak ones standing tall...I will watch them fall...'Cause they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,....To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Unclean minds mislead the pure...The innocent will leave for sure....For them there is a resting place....People sinning just for fun...They will never see the sun....For they can never show their faces...There ain't no room for the hopeless sinner....Who will take more than he will give, he will give, he will give.....He ain't hardly gonna give....The greed of man will be....Far away from me.....And my soul will be free....And they won't go when I go....Since my soul conceived....All that I believe....The kingdom I will see....'Cause they won't go when I go....And I'll go....Where I'll go.....No one, can keep, me from....My destiny....Stevie Wonder/They Won't Go When I Go ![]() ![]() One of the qualities that Kari Wuhrer has that I find endearing is that she's outspoken. It takes someone who is fearless, and bold to be outspoken because you don't sugarcoat anything or kiss anyones ass. You speak your mind unapologetically and tell it like it is. To be outspoken is also a quality of a leader and not a follower. People who are outspoken are often labeled as difficult, combative, don't get along well with others, and in some cases as arrogant. There's nothing wrong with being outspoken. I shudder to think what this country would be like if not for the outspoken women/men who changed history. If you're outspoken stand up and be proud. To be outspoken is to be free of any false pretenses. Speak your mind and stay true to yourself. Any Way People are unreasonable, illogical, and self-centered....Love them anyway...If you do good, people will accuse you of selfish, ulterior motives....Do good anyway....If you are successful, you win false friends and true enemies....Succeed anyway....The good you do will be forgotten tomorrow....Do good anyway......Honesty and frankness make you vulnerable......Be honest and frank anyway....What you spent years building may be destroyed overnight....Build anyway....People really need help but may attack you if you help them....Help them anyway.....Give the world the best you have and you might get kicked in the teeth...Give the world the best you've got anyway......Mother Teresa I'm Published I have a new Novel called Darkness and Light for those of you who have enjoyed my fanfics. It can be found here: Darkness and Light Webpage |
| Starleana Brandon |
Jul 31 2008, 12:45 AM
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Great job, Tinks!
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| tinkerbell23 |
Aug 2 2008, 06:56 PM
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Note: A few things to keep in mind when reading this next chapter. I didn't proof read 'cause I'm lazy. No shocker there. LOL. I usually don't proof read anyways, with the exception of the last one. Next, I am so proud that the last chapter aroused so many great questions, all of which will be answered in future chapters. Also, I watch a lot of Alias which is where my main inspiration for this entire story came from, especially the action scenes coming up in chapter 7.
Enjoy this next chapter. I'm thinking I might update Begin Again next. Maybe. Chapter 6 He stood in front of his son’s grave. Who would murder a defenseless teenager in cold blood? Lorenzo thought to himself. He could only come up with one answer: Manuel Ruiz. “I swear I will find who ever did this to you and I will make them pay.” Lorenzo heard footsteps. He turned his head slightly and saw Carly walking over to where he stood. “Thought I might find you here.” Carly said, now standing next to him. She looked down at Diego’s grave and frowned. “I’m so sorry, Lorenzo, about Diego. He didn’t deserve to die like that.” “He didn’t deserve to die at all.” Lorenzo replied. “What are you doing here, Carly?” “Well, I just wanted to see if you were okay, especially after what happened yesterday. It must have been hard for you.” “I’ll be okay once I’m far away from Port Charles.” “But what about Reese?” “She seems to have moved on and I plan on doing just that once I take care of some unfinished business.” “Reese loves you, Lorenzo. You can’t just leave without hearing her side of things first.” “If Reese gave a damn about me, then she wouldn’t have shacked up with Jason Morgan, of all people.” He said with complete and utter disgust. “What surprises me most is that she didn’t hop right back into bed with Sonny the first chance she got.” “Oh, Lorenzo.” Carly began. “You will never know just how much pain Reese truly went through since your alleged death.” “Funny. It doesn’t seem to show.” Lorenzo glanced at his watch. “Whatever hell Reese went through in the six months I have been missing is nothing compared to what my son suffered his entire life and now I will be leaving town to honor his memory. If you’ll excuse me...” Lorenzo began to walk past Carly but she managed to grab a hold of his arm. “Wait.” She said. “How long will you be gone?” “I bought a one way ticket to Buenos Aries. That should tell you something.” “Argentina?” Carly curiously asked with a mischievous look on her face. “You know your geography.” He retorted while continuing to walk away. “I hear ‘The Gallery’ is an excellent club.” She hollered to Lorenzo as he walked away, leaving a bewildered look on his face. Carly smiled. ‘Maybe fate isn’t hocus pocus, mumbo jumbo after all. Maybe it really does exist. And maybe Reese and Lorenzo are meant to be together after all.’ She thought to herself. As Carly was walking, she passed by a grave marked Michael ‘Sonny’ Corinthos II. She gazed down at his grave with tears threatening to fall from her eyes. “Thanks.” He payed the cab driver and got out. He looked around at his surroundings and proceeded to enter a noisy provocative club with sign that said, ‘The Gallery.’ Lorenzo silently wondered how Carly could have known about a club in Argentina where he was meeting a man who would help him locate Manny Ruiz. The boys in the band, Decide to appear. We walk through the door Savour the air. The girls on the floor, I've come here to stare. We've come here to stare. The place was jam-packed with people. He walked over to the bar. “Bourbon. No ice.” He shouted over the loud music to the bartender and slapped some money onto the counter. Yeah Don’t touch the girls, Don’t kiss the girls, I have the right to pull the girls. He reached for his drink and took a swig. He then sat it back down on the counter and glanced around as he waited for Santiago. But I wanna touch, And I wanna kiss, And if you say no then I will persist, With you tonight, You'll make it right. You know that you're wetting my appetite. At the corner of his eye, he saw a woman with short burgundy hair dancing sensually on stage along with a few other women. For some unknown reason the red-haired woman intrigued him. Her back faced him. However, when the woman turned around and faced him, his eyes widened in shock. Don’t know what you think you're doing to me, (Hey Stripper, Hey Stripper) Don’t know what you see its getting to me, (Hey Stripper, Hey I wanna be your mister) The woman dancing on stage was none other than Reese Marshall. Lyrics used: “Stripper” by Soho Dolls -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Any and all artwork displayed here was created by the following talented people: Lori, Emmers, and Chantel. Avatar Credit: hilaryd.org gallery~ All's Fair in Love & War Playlist Fanfiction.net Myspace Multiply YouTube Twitter |
| Sarah1073 |
Aug 2 2008, 09:50 PM
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Wow!!!
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| knhgrl1 |
Aug 3 2008, 12:27 PM
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LOL I love it. Funny how we both had Reese dancing in a club in our stories. It sure did remind me of Alias and I'm looking forward to having all of our questions answered. I'm very much intrigued.
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R.I.P Reese Marshall...the ultimate ride or die chick.....Nov 14....You are missed If I had no more time...No more time left to be here...Would you cherish what we had?...Was it everything that you were looking for?...If I couldn’t feel your touch...And no longer were you with me...I’d be wishing you were here...To be everything that I’d be looking for....I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me...‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed...So every time you hold me...Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....Every time you touch me...Touch me like this is the last time....Promise that you’ll love me.....Love me like you’ll never see me again...How many really know what love is?....Millions never will...Do you know until you lose it....That it’s everything that we are looking for....When I wake up in the morning....You’re beside me....I’m so thankful that I found....Everything that I been looking for...I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me....‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed....So everytime you hold me.....Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....(can you do that for me baby)....Every time you touch me....(see we don’t really know)...Touch me like this is the last time....(see everyday we never know)...Promise that you’ll love me....(I want you to promise me).....Love me like you’ll never see me again.....(like you’ll never see me again)...Like You'll Never See Me Again/Alicia Keys...ReeSon Fan 4ever Check out my fanfics Fresh Starts/Crossroads/Into the Shadows/ Bullets and Diapers/When All Else Fails/The Machiavellian Twist/Mindgames/Webs of Deception/Lost Memories/Lethal Passions/Renee's Comeback/After All The Dust Settles/Love is Eternal/Destiny and Fate/Soul Twins/Vengeance and Passion/Endgame/Love and Pain/The Chronicles of Reese and Sonny Reese and ReeSon lives on in these stories...It's funny people say that ReeSon was a bomb...a failure...if that was really the case then why did ReeSon stay in the top of the polls and Kari stayed in the polls if ReeSon was a failure...what ended ReeSon was TPTB decision to sabotage the story by trying to destroy Reese's character and deciding to let Kari go....ReeSon was popular and a hit and one of the best Sonny pairings since S&B....if ReeSon was such a failure as the haters would like to believe then why are they still talking about them ~Kathryn H/knhgrl1~ Darkside#22 Reese's Piece#15 True love has no boundaries My YouTube Page My Twitter Page My Daily Motion Page MySpace Page Facebook Page Really liking this song KWO Rocks Kari Fan Always!!!!!! When you're having a bad day check this video out Manager meltdown on YouTube "It's all for love..,L.O.V.E" "I really feel that nature is trying so hard to compensate for man's mismanagement at the planet. Cause the planet is sick. like a fever, if we don't fix it now it's at the point of no return. This is our last chance to fix this problem that we have or it's like a runaway train and the time has come. This Is It. People are always saying, 'Oh they'll take care of it. The government, they'll' 'They'll?' 'They'll Who?' It starts with us, it's us, or else it'll never be done." Michael Jackson This Is It ![]() RIP Michael 08/29/58- 06/25/09 No more lying friends...Wanting tragic ends...Though they do pretend...They won't go when I go...All those bleeding hearts...With sorrows to impart...Were right here from the start...And they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,...To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Gone from painful cries...Away from saddened eyes...Along with him I'll bide....And they won't go when I go...Big men feeling small...Weak ones standing tall...I will watch them fall...'Cause they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,....To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Unclean minds mislead the pure...The innocent will leave for sure....For them there is a resting place....People sinning just for fun...They will never see the sun....For they can never show their faces...There ain't no room for the hopeless sinner....Who will take more than he will give, he will give, he will give.....He ain't hardly gonna give....The greed of man will be....Far away from me.....And my soul will be free....And they won't go when I go....Since my soul conceived....All that I believe....The kingdom I will see....'Cause they won't go when I go....And I'll go....Where I'll go.....No one, can keep, me from....My destiny....Stevie Wonder/They Won't Go When I Go ![]() ![]() One of the qualities that Kari Wuhrer has that I find endearing is that she's outspoken. It takes someone who is fearless, and bold to be outspoken because you don't sugarcoat anything or kiss anyones ass. You speak your mind unapologetically and tell it like it is. To be outspoken is also a quality of a leader and not a follower. People who are outspoken are often labeled as difficult, combative, don't get along well with others, and in some cases as arrogant. There's nothing wrong with being outspoken. I shudder to think what this country would be like if not for the outspoken women/men who changed history. If you're outspoken stand up and be proud. To be outspoken is to be free of any false pretenses. Speak your mind and stay true to yourself. Any Way People are unreasonable, illogical, and self-centered....Love them anyway...If you do good, people will accuse you of selfish, ulterior motives....Do good anyway....If you are successful, you win false friends and true enemies....Succeed anyway....The good you do will be forgotten tomorrow....Do good anyway......Honesty and frankness make you vulnerable......Be honest and frank anyway....What you spent years building may be destroyed overnight....Build anyway....People really need help but may attack you if you help them....Help them anyway.....Give the world the best you have and you might get kicked in the teeth...Give the world the best you've got anyway......Mother Teresa I'm Published I have a new Novel called Darkness and Light for those of you who have enjoyed my fanfics. It can be found here: Darkness and Light Webpage |
| Starleana Brandon |
Aug 5 2008, 12:23 AM
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Great job, Tinks!
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| tinkerbell23 |
Apr 14 2009, 09:56 PM
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Just stopping by to drop off a brand new chapter and then its off to bed. Yes, you read right. I plan on finishing this story hopefully before the end of this year. LOL. This new chapter is mostly lyrics, which was slightly unintentional. Whops. And, also, keep in mind that I have spelling issues. LOL. Thats an understatement.
Well, enjoy! Chapter 7 They both instantly locked eyes but only for a brief moment. ‘What the hell is he doing here?’ Reese thought to herself. Lorenzo’s unexplainable presence was about to blow not only her cover, but everything she had been working for in recent months. Nevertheless, Reese continued dancing and figured she would have to either improvise or come up with plan B. Like you're perfume, Your skin is smooth. The way you move, Im in the mood. Tease the crowd, Please the crowd, I'm boiling i want you to see me now. Lorenzo extended his arm and grabbed his drink from the counter. He took a big gulp, figuring he’d need it after seeing his ex-lover dancing on stage posing as a stripper. This was definitely going to be a long night. You get me girl, When you're nervous well, And when your hand is in the thong. You may be right, I close them tight, You're saving the best for me tonight. “Lorenzo Alcazar.” A man said, while approaching Lorenzo. He turned and saw a dark, tall man wearing a dark blue suit accompanied with three well-armed body guards. “Jose Santiago.” The two men stood face to face and embraced slightly and patted their backs. “We all thought you were dead, homie. What happened?” Jose asked inquiringly, while leaning against the bar. Lorenzo grinned slightly. “Sorry to disappoint you, Mr. Santiago. Fate seems to have other plans for me.” The bartender handed Jose a drink. “Man, it has been too long.” He said while smiling smugly and sipping his drink. “You have no idea.” Lorenzo replied as he gazed over at Reese on stage. You can call me x, You can call me y, You can call me z, You can come and try. Come and try. “Ah,” Jose began, “I see you have a fascination with one of my most favorite money makers, Sasha.” He leaned in close to Lorenzo. “You know, If you want, I can have her help you work out your frustrations if you’d like. She’s good at that.” Dont know what you think you're doing to me, (Hey! Stripper, Hey! Stripper) Dont know what you see its getting to me, (Hey! Stripper, Hey! I wanna be your mister) Na na, Na na, Na na, Na na, Na Na na, Na na, Na na, Na na, Na Na na, Na na, Na na, Na na, Na Na na, Na na, Na na, Na na, Na Once the song was over, the curtains were drawn. Lorenzo turned his attention back to Jose. “No thanks.” Lorenzo answered. “I’ll pass. I do, however, need some information on someone.” “Hey, your loss is another’s gain.” Jose snapped his fingers together and one of his guards went backstage. Jose and his two other body guards walked over to the back corner of the club and Lorenzo followed suit. Both Lorenzo and Jose sat down. “What kind of information do you need?” Jose asked while his guards got situated. “I’m sure you’re well aware that about a year ago, my son was murdered in cold blood.” Jose nodded his head. “I’ve heard.” “Well, just before an attempted had been made on my life,” Lorenzo watched as a waitress brought over two. “I had finally found the man responsible for my son’s death.” Jose’s bodyguard re-joined the group along with Reese. “Hello, gentlemen.” Reese said, while grinning ever slightly. Lorenzo simply eyed her suspiciously. Jose and his bodyguards stood and Lorenzo followed. “Sasha,” Jose began, “I was just trying to talk my friend into getting a more intimate performance from you. Sadly, he decided to pass. I, on the other hand, would love to take his place.” Reese, posing as Sasha, cocked her head to the side and arched her brow. “Now, Mr. Santiago, you know I don’t do that.” Jose stepped closer to her. “What if I made it worth your wild?” Time It's not worth my time Moonshine Bleeds into my eyes Reese smiled mischievously. She, then, unexpectedly pushed Jose onto the chair directly behind him. Reese began moving her body slowly and seductively. Lorenzo watched in disgust and yet, he found himself more curious as to what exactly happened after he was believed to be dead. I still Sleep on the right side Of the white noise Can't leave the scene behind Could I be anything you want me to be And show me the way to be seen When Reese was about to move closer to Jose, the lights where cut off. The darkness surrounded the club instantly. Only voices could be heard and movement could be felt. The next thing Lorenzo knew, someone grabbed his arm and pulled him away. He followed the person guiding him, not really having a choice. [Chorus] Do you see yourself in a crowded room? Do you think I'll snitch? Are you pistol-whipped? Do you step in line or release the glitch? Can you fall asleep with a panic switch? Just as the emergency exit door opened, the club lights were turned back on. Lorenzo was not all that surprised to see Reese’s hand on his arm. “Reese.” He said, simply. “Shhh.” She didn’t want to blow her cover. It was bad enough that Lorenzo was there. She had hoped he wouldn’t go looking for danger. However, it was too late. He had unknowingly walked right into the middle of something he was not quite yet ready for. Lorenzo turned his head only to see Jose search himself for something. “Where’s my…?” Jose grumbled angrily to his guards. He glanced across the room and saw Reese and Lorenzo standing close to one of the emergency exits. “That bitch has my phone!” He yelled and pointed. Both body guards began to walk swiftly towards both Reese and Lorenzo, dodging scared civilians. When you see yourself in a crowded room, Do you think I'll snitch? Are you pistol whipped? Do you step in line or release the glitch? Do you think she'll sleep with a panic? “Come on. We have to move.” Reese grabbed Lorenzo’s hand and proceeded to guide him out of the club. And I'll try to hold on tight tonight. Pink slip, inviting me inside. I want to burn skin and brand what once was mine, But the red news came ripping in to fight. If I go anywhere that you want me to go, How do I know you'll still follow? Stripper by Soho Dolls; Panic Switch by Silversun Pickups -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Any and all artwork displayed here was created by the following talented people: Lori, Emmers, and Chantel. Avatar Credit: hilaryd.org gallery~ All's Fair in Love & War Playlist Fanfiction.net Myspace Multiply YouTube Twitter |
| Starleana Brandon |
Apr 14 2009, 11:29 PM
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Great job!
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| knhgrl1 |
Apr 16 2009, 04:06 PM
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![]() Outspoken Chick, Published Author, and Kari Fanatic ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,669 Joined: 10-January 05 From: Ohio Skin: Purples Galore Member No.: 20 |
That was excellent Tink. You are a excellent writer. The fanfic section has been quiet. I may not be writing fanfic's right now, but I'm still writing which soon I will go into more detail about.
-------------------- ![]() ![]() Thanks Lorri, Carla, Drea97, Karifan,and Kea for the kickass banners and avatars...Special shoutout to Chantel and Lorri for the fanfic banner...you both rock!!!!!!! R.I.P Reese Marshall...the ultimate ride or die chick.....Nov 14....You are missed If I had no more time...No more time left to be here...Would you cherish what we had?...Was it everything that you were looking for?...If I couldn’t feel your touch...And no longer were you with me...I’d be wishing you were here...To be everything that I’d be looking for....I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me...‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed...So every time you hold me...Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....Every time you touch me...Touch me like this is the last time....Promise that you’ll love me.....Love me like you’ll never see me again...How many really know what love is?....Millions never will...Do you know until you lose it....That it’s everything that we are looking for....When I wake up in the morning....You’re beside me....I’m so thankful that I found....Everything that I been looking for...I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me....‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed....So everytime you hold me.....Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....(can you do that for me baby)....Every time you touch me....(see we don’t really know)...Touch me like this is the last time....(see everyday we never know)...Promise that you’ll love me....(I want you to promise me).....Love me like you’ll never see me again.....(like you’ll never see me again)...Like You'll Never See Me Again/Alicia Keys...ReeSon Fan 4ever Check out my fanfics Fresh Starts/Crossroads/Into the Shadows/ Bullets and Diapers/When All Else Fails/The Machiavellian Twist/Mindgames/Webs of Deception/Lost Memories/Lethal Passions/Renee's Comeback/After All The Dust Settles/Love is Eternal/Destiny and Fate/Soul Twins/Vengeance and Passion/Endgame/Love and Pain/The Chronicles of Reese and Sonny Reese and ReeSon lives on in these stories...It's funny people say that ReeSon was a bomb...a failure...if that was really the case then why did ReeSon stay in the top of the polls and Kari stayed in the polls if ReeSon was a failure...what ended ReeSon was TPTB decision to sabotage the story by trying to destroy Reese's character and deciding to let Kari go....ReeSon was popular and a hit and one of the best Sonny pairings since S&B....if ReeSon was such a failure as the haters would like to believe then why are they still talking about them ~Kathryn H/knhgrl1~ Darkside#22 Reese's Piece#15 True love has no boundaries My YouTube Page My Twitter Page My Daily Motion Page MySpace Page Facebook Page Really liking this song KWO Rocks Kari Fan Always!!!!!! When you're having a bad day check this video out Manager meltdown on YouTube "It's all for love..,L.O.V.E" "I really feel that nature is trying so hard to compensate for man's mismanagement at the planet. Cause the planet is sick. like a fever, if we don't fix it now it's at the point of no return. This is our last chance to fix this problem that we have or it's like a runaway train and the time has come. This Is It. People are always saying, 'Oh they'll take care of it. The government, they'll' 'They'll?' 'They'll Who?' It starts with us, it's us, or else it'll never be done." Michael Jackson This Is It ![]() RIP Michael 08/29/58- 06/25/09 No more lying friends...Wanting tragic ends...Though they do pretend...They won't go when I go...All those bleeding hearts...With sorrows to impart...Were right here from the start...And they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,...To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Gone from painful cries...Away from saddened eyes...Along with him I'll bide....And they won't go when I go...Big men feeling small...Weak ones standing tall...I will watch them fall...'Cause they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,....To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Unclean minds mislead the pure...The innocent will leave for sure....For them there is a resting place....People sinning just for fun...They will never see the sun....For they can never show their faces...There ain't no room for the hopeless sinner....Who will take more than he will give, he will give, he will give.....He ain't hardly gonna give....The greed of man will be....Far away from me.....And my soul will be free....And they won't go when I go....Since my soul conceived....All that I believe....The kingdom I will see....'Cause they won't go when I go....And I'll go....Where I'll go.....No one, can keep, me from....My destiny....Stevie Wonder/They Won't Go When I Go ![]() ![]() One of the qualities that Kari Wuhrer has that I find endearing is that she's outspoken. It takes someone who is fearless, and bold to be outspoken because you don't sugarcoat anything or kiss anyones ass. You speak your mind unapologetically and tell it like it is. To be outspoken is also a quality of a leader and not a follower. People who are outspoken are often labeled as difficult, combative, don't get along well with others, and in some cases as arrogant. There's nothing wrong with being outspoken. I shudder to think what this country would be like if not for the outspoken women/men who changed history. If you're outspoken stand up and be proud. To be outspoken is to be free of any false pretenses. Speak your mind and stay true to yourself. Any Way People are unreasonable, illogical, and self-centered....Love them anyway...If you do good, people will accuse you of selfish, ulterior motives....Do good anyway....If you are successful, you win false friends and true enemies....Succeed anyway....The good you do will be forgotten tomorrow....Do good anyway......Honesty and frankness make you vulnerable......Be honest and frank anyway....What you spent years building may be destroyed overnight....Build anyway....People really need help but may attack you if you help them....Help them anyway.....Give the world the best you have and you might get kicked in the teeth...Give the world the best you've got anyway......Mother Teresa I'm Published I have a new Novel called Darkness and Light for those of you who have enjoyed my fanfics. It can be found here: Darkness and Light Webpage |
| Sarah1073 |
Apr 16 2009, 04:42 PM
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Wow, Tink!
I know what you mwean by unfinished story. I've only wrote six chapters.. I'm not sure when exactly the story will end! -------------------- ![]() Thanks Chantel!! ![]() Thanks Lorri!! ![]() Thanks Lorri!!! Credit goes to Amber at Crafty Chicks Inn for my avatar. Thanks!!! |
| Lorri |
Apr 20 2009, 08:32 AM
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I'm all caught up! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
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| tinkerbell23 |
Aug 11 2009, 01:27 PM
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Author's Note: This chapter includes a few characters from One Life to Live; Antonio Vega (who did not leave to hunt Carlo Hesser), Talia Sahid (who did not die), and Oliver Fish (who is not gay in my story). These characters will most likely make more appearances in future chapters.
Chapter 8 “What the hell is going on?” Lorenzo asked as he followed Reese to a dark alley just outside the club. Seconds later, a black van pulled out in front of them. “I’ll explain later.” Reese said. The sliding door to the van opened and Reese jumped in. “Get in.” Lorenzo looked back briefly just as bullets began flying in their direction. He had no choice. The second he was in the van, the door slammed shut and took off. The guards kept shooting at the van until it was out of sight. Reese took her wig off and tossed it aside. She shook her head to let her wavy locks loose. Looking back, Lorenzo saw a shy young man sitting behind them hand Reese a black coat. “Think you might need this.” “Thanks, Fish.” She put the coat on and ran her fingers through her hair. “You okay, Reese?” The wavy brunette haired woman in the front seat of the van turned to her side to look at Reese. Lorenzo sat silently as he observed the occupants in the vehicle. “Yeah.” She answered. “Thanks for the distraction.” “You’re welcome.” She looked at Lorenzo in astonishment and then she turned back to Reese. “Who’s this?” “Talia, this is Lorenzo Alcazar.” Reese said, bracing herself for what she knew was coming. “Are you insane?” Said the driver. ‘And there it is.’ Reese thought to herself. “I’m sure what Antonio meant to say is,” Talia began, interrupting an obviously upset Antonio, “You took a really big risk bringing him along with us, Reese.” “I know, but I couldn’t just leave him there.” Reese extended her arm back with Santiago’s phone in her hand. “Here, Fish. I got you a souvenir.” “Sweet.” Fish took the phone and hooked it up to his laptop. “Now lets find out where Mr. Jorge Rivera, or should I say, Manuel Ruiz, is hiding.” “Remember, Fish, we are also looking for informants, ‘employees’, contacts used by either the Ruiz family or the Corinthos organization who haven’t been arrested or turned FBI informant.” Talia added. “Got it.” Lorenzo looked down at his hands as soon as he put two and two together. He suddenly turned his head to the side. “Since when did you start working for the FBI again?” He asked Reese. She looked at him dead straight in the eyes before she answered him. “About three and a half months ago.” Everyone could feel the tension between Reese and Lorenzo. Not another word was spoken. Once they pulled into the airport parking lot, Fish sighed triumphantly. “And…Almost…There. Got it. He’s in Havana with two of Corinthos’ former employees.” “Good work, Fish. See if you can narrow their current location, then contact me with the details.” Reese told him. Everyone got out of the car. “Sahid, inform Agent Marquist that I’ll be in touch just as soon as I land in Cuba.” “Wait, Reese.” Antonio reached for her arm. “You’re not seriously going to Havana alone, are you?” He asked. “She’s not going alone.” Lorenzo interrupted Reese as she was just about to answer Antonio. “No. No way am I letting you hunt down a psycho path with only a thug as back up.” Antonio hissed. Lorenzo rolled his eyes. He really loathed that word. Reese looked at Lorenzo then back at Antonio. “I have a small window of opportunity to bring down the most dangerous man I know.” She jerked her arm free. “I’m going.” Antonio looked at Talia briefly and turned his attention back at Reese. “At least let me come with you.” “No.” She answered firmly. “You have a family to think of.” She grinned slightly at Talia. “What about Mia?” “This is my fight, Antonio. My daughter isn’t safe until Manuel Ruiz is behind bars.” A single tear fell down her cheek. “Besides, I out rank you, detective.” She smiled playfully. “It’s okay. I can take care of myself, Vega.” She began walking away with Lorenzo following close behind. “Be safe.” Talia hollered from behind them. “I will.” Reese said. Reese knew if she told Lorenzo to stay behind, he wouldn’t. It was no use. He was willing to walk right into danger if it meant avenging his son’s death. Two and a half hours passed by. The silence continued between Reese and Lorenzo. They sat on opposite sides of the plane and avoided eye contact. She continued looking out the window next to her. “Why didn’t you let me know you were okay?” Reese asked, looking at him and breaking the awkward silence. “I was literally out of my mind with grief after you were pronounced dead. You could’ve at least called to let me know you were alive, but you didn’t.” “I didn’t want anyone to know where I was. Someone wanted me dead, Reese. I thought I was protecting you,” He added, “but clearly you don’t need the protection.” “You’re right. I don’t need protection, but I needed you,” She paused briefly, “I still do.” -------------------- ![]() ![]() ![]() ~Any and all artwork displayed here was created by the following talented people: Lori, Emmers, and Chantel. Avatar Credit: hilaryd.org gallery~ All's Fair in Love & War Playlist Fanfiction.net Myspace Multiply YouTube Twitter |
| Sarah1073 |
Aug 11 2009, 06:28 PM
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Wow! GREAT JOB, Tink!!! Love how you incorporated Antonio, Talia and Fish in a way that makes sense! Reese would definitely have the same attitude with Antonio if this played out on GH or OLTL. Like how Reese and Lorenzo admitted that they still need each other.
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| knhgrl1 |
Aug 23 2009, 05:50 PM
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Loved it tink. I'm not familiar with the other characters from OLTL except for Antonio LOL. I loved the tension in the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
-------------------- ![]() ![]() Thanks Lorri, Carla, Drea97, Karifan,and Kea for the kickass banners and avatars...Special shoutout to Chantel and Lorri for the fanfic banner...you both rock!!!!!!! R.I.P Reese Marshall...the ultimate ride or die chick.....Nov 14....You are missed If I had no more time...No more time left to be here...Would you cherish what we had?...Was it everything that you were looking for?...If I couldn’t feel your touch...And no longer were you with me...I’d be wishing you were here...To be everything that I’d be looking for....I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me...‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed...So every time you hold me...Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....Every time you touch me...Touch me like this is the last time....Promise that you’ll love me.....Love me like you’ll never see me again...How many really know what love is?....Millions never will...Do you know until you lose it....That it’s everything that we are looking for....When I wake up in the morning....You’re beside me....I’m so thankful that I found....Everything that I been looking for...I don’t wanna forget the present is a gift...And I don’t wanna take for granted the time you may have here with me....‘Cause Lord only knows another day is not really guaranteed....So everytime you hold me.....Hold me like this is the last time...Every time you kiss me...Kiss me like you’ll never see me again....(can you do that for me baby)....Every time you touch me....(see we don’t really know)...Touch me like this is the last time....(see everyday we never know)...Promise that you’ll love me....(I want you to promise me).....Love me like you’ll never see me again.....(like you’ll never see me again)...Like You'll Never See Me Again/Alicia Keys...ReeSon Fan 4ever Check out my fanfics Fresh Starts/Crossroads/Into the Shadows/ Bullets and Diapers/When All Else Fails/The Machiavellian Twist/Mindgames/Webs of Deception/Lost Memories/Lethal Passions/Renee's Comeback/After All The Dust Settles/Love is Eternal/Destiny and Fate/Soul Twins/Vengeance and Passion/Endgame/Love and Pain/The Chronicles of Reese and Sonny Reese and ReeSon lives on in these stories...It's funny people say that ReeSon was a bomb...a failure...if that was really the case then why did ReeSon stay in the top of the polls and Kari stayed in the polls if ReeSon was a failure...what ended ReeSon was TPTB decision to sabotage the story by trying to destroy Reese's character and deciding to let Kari go....ReeSon was popular and a hit and one of the best Sonny pairings since S&B....if ReeSon was such a failure as the haters would like to believe then why are they still talking about them ~Kathryn H/knhgrl1~ Darkside#22 Reese's Piece#15 True love has no boundaries My YouTube Page My Twitter Page My Daily Motion Page MySpace Page Facebook Page Really liking this song KWO Rocks Kari Fan Always!!!!!! When you're having a bad day check this video out Manager meltdown on YouTube "It's all for love..,L.O.V.E" "I really feel that nature is trying so hard to compensate for man's mismanagement at the planet. Cause the planet is sick. like a fever, if we don't fix it now it's at the point of no return. This is our last chance to fix this problem that we have or it's like a runaway train and the time has come. This Is It. People are always saying, 'Oh they'll take care of it. The government, they'll' 'They'll?' 'They'll Who?' It starts with us, it's us, or else it'll never be done." Michael Jackson This Is It ![]() RIP Michael 08/29/58- 06/25/09 No more lying friends...Wanting tragic ends...Though they do pretend...They won't go when I go...All those bleeding hearts...With sorrows to impart...Were right here from the start...And they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,...To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Gone from painful cries...Away from saddened eyes...Along with him I'll bide....And they won't go when I go...Big men feeling small...Weak ones standing tall...I will watch them fall...'Cause they won't go when I go...And I'll go, where I've longed,....To go, so long,...Away, from tears...Unclean minds mislead the pure...The innocent will leave for sure....For them there is a resting place....People sinning just for fun...They will never see the sun....For they can never show their faces...There ain't no room for the hopeless sinner....Who will take more than he will give, he will give, he will give.....He ain't hardly gonna give....The greed of man will be....Far away from me.....And my soul will be free....And they won't go when I go....Since my soul conceived....All that I believe....The kingdom I will see....'Cause they won't go when I go....And I'll go....Where I'll go.....No one, can keep, me from....My destiny....Stevie Wonder/They Won't Go When I Go ![]() ![]() One of the qualities that Kari Wuhrer has that I find endearing is that she's outspoken. It takes someone who is fearless, and bold to be outspoken because you don't sugarcoat anything or kiss anyones ass. You speak your mind unapologetically and tell it like it is. To be outspoken is also a quality of a leader and not a follower. People who are outspoken are often labeled as difficult, combative, don't get along well with others, and in some cases as arrogant. There's nothing wrong with being outspoken. I shudder to think what this country would be like if not for the outspoken women/men who changed history. If you're outspoken stand up and be proud. To be outspoken is to be free of any false pretenses. Speak your mind and stay true to yourself. Any Way People are unreasonable, illogical, and self-centered....Love them anyway...If you do good, people will accuse you of selfish, ulterior motives....Do good anyway....If you are successful, you win false friends and true enemies....Succeed anyway....The good you do will be forgotten tomorrow....Do good anyway......Honesty and frankness make you vulnerable......Be honest and frank anyway....What you spent years building may be destroyed overnight....Build anyway....People really need help but may attack you if you help them....Help them anyway.....Give the world the best you have and you might get kicked in the teeth...Give the world the best you've got anyway......Mother Teresa I'm Published I have a new Novel called Darkness and Light for those of you who have enjoyed my fanfics. It can be found here: Darkness and Light Webpage |
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